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16 August 2007 @ 06:42 pm
Imagery - Fic  
Title: Imagery
Author: Lysa (analytical_47)
Pairing: Wilson/Bonnie, Wilson/House
Rating: NC-17
Words: 484
Summary: get_house_laid prompt 168. Wilson/Bonnie -- Wilson cries House's name during a blowjob.
Disclaimer: I can't afford a new camera. Why would I own House?
A/N: Beta'd by starlingthefool. She is the greatest! Without her, this fic would have never been posted. :)
A/N 2: First smut!fic ever. I'm serious. I've never written smut before. Concrit makes me happy.


Bonnie's hands are quick and light on Wilson's upper thigh, tracing circles on his skin, as is her mouth, mere centimetres away. Her tongue paints patterns on Wilson's erection, fleetingly and delicately, almost like a bird afraid to land. Each ministration of her mouth sends pulses of pleasure through Wilson's nerves, and he lets out a quiet moan, tangling his hands in her loose curls.

But as he grasps at her hair, it changes. The smooth, conditioned locks between his fingers shorten, becoming coarser and thinner with each pull. The mouth enclosed around his throbbing cock becomes stronger, larger, hungrier; the tongue within no longer anxious. Day old stubble brushes against Wilson's thighs, prickling his skin, sending useless signals of pain instantly swallowed by waves of euphoria.

House's hands are possessive, gripping Wilson's thighs, holding him back as his tongue works. Muscular arms hold him there, and Wilson lets go of his hair to trail his fingers down the exposed skin of House's arm, letting his fingers slip under the sleeve of his t-shirt. He doesn't seem to mind as Wilson's fingers dig into his biceps after he pulls away, administering a quick nip to Wilson's inner thigh, smoothing over the area with his tongue again in one fluid motion and closing over Wilson’s length again.

House's mouth suddenly pulls back, and a breeze of cool air surrounds Wilson's groin, causing him to take a sharp intake of breath. He grasps for House's hair again, determined to have the job finished correctly.

"House," he hisses, voice thick with desperation. He grabs fistfuls of House's short, rough hair again, but instead is greeted with longer, silkier strands.

Oh.

Wilson keeps his eyes shut and everything seems to stop. He feels Bonnie pull back and can sense the glare she's giving him.

"Not again," she spits.

He dares not look as she gets up, leaving his throbbing cock unattended to. He grits his teeth and slams his hands down onto the sofa, frustrated with Bonnie, with House, and with himself, frustrated that he's let this happen. Again.

He feels the blood beginning to rush away from his crotch, almost as disappointed as he was. He feels himself go limp, but he still aches, his cock unaware of what his brain has done. Wilson lets out of quiet groan of futility and finally opens his eyes.

He sees Bonnie is sitting on the other side of the room, leaning forward in her chair, wringing her hands. She's glaring in his direction, eyes scrutinising the crumpled figure before her. She wonders what he's thinking, wonders if he's thinking of that bastard.

He catches her eyes, and she sends him a message. Get out.

Wilson understands. Bonnie watches him grab his coat and go, listens to each quiet 'click' as the door closes behind him.

Later that night, Wilson will jack off in House's shower, hoping to get caught.
 
 
Mood: grumpygrumpy
 
 
 
SNAPE KILLS DUMBLEDORE, AGAIN!: GEORGE TAKEI WILL SEX YOU UPhry2007 on August 16th, 2007 11:16 pm (UTC)
YOU PICKED MY PROMPT!!!!! *goes to read*
SNAPE KILLS DUMBLEDORE, AGAIN!: wilson excitedhry2007 on August 16th, 2007 11:22 pm (UTC)
A bit of a shorter read than most smut, but I liked it a lot. The ending was great, as was the slip into fantasy.
me.theyreforrachel on August 16th, 2007 11:26 pm (UTC)
it started out even shorter XD
and thanks, glad I did you prompt justice. :)
Something.yummysubculture on August 17th, 2007 04:50 am (UTC)
your icon is SO MUCH WIN. i'm such a george takei fangirl, even though he's like a million years old and flamingly gay. OMG. it's just... so much win.
pen: [house] h/w lookingsavemoony on August 16th, 2007 11:38 pm (UTC)
you have typo: "got of his hair" should be "go of his hair".

I liked the last line.
me.theyreforrachel on August 16th, 2007 11:41 pm (UTC)
thanks :) Typo fixed.
PL0X: house and wilsonlady_twatterby on August 17th, 2007 12:15 am (UTC)
Aww, that was slightly sad, but very easy to imagine happening...

I hope he gets caught, too. *crosses fingers* ...Could there be a sequel in that notion? *hopeful grin*
me.theyreforrachel on August 17th, 2007 12:35 am (UTC)
thanks :)

you're the second person to ask me that haha. We'll have to see (I've got another smutfest prompt and a multi-chapter Wilson ordeal to do)
imfreakinorange on August 17th, 2007 12:35 am (UTC)
That was awesome!! LOL I love how you made Bonnie morph into House... very cool!! and Wilson's reaction... priceless...

Write more... please :)
me.theyreforrachel on August 17th, 2007 12:37 am (UTC)
thanks! :) wilson's such a little whore heh

and, as i said in the above reply, we'll see. i've got other things to write
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me.theyreforrachel on August 17th, 2007 12:38 am (UTC)
thanks :)

haha, i was like "WHY DID I COMMENT ON MY OWN STORY?"
triedunture on August 17th, 2007 02:06 am (UTC)
Awesome! Great last line. (Poor Bonnie though...like, her name doesn't even have the same number of syllables. You can't even play that off.)
me.theyreforrachel on August 17th, 2007 03:23 pm (UTC)
that was probably Wilson's excuse the first time.

and thank you :)
Johnjouse on August 17th, 2007 03:32 am (UTC)
Short and perfect. Great job.
me.theyreforrachel on August 17th, 2007 03:23 pm (UTC)
thanks :)
Little Miss GG: house/wilsonlittlemissgg on August 17th, 2007 09:22 am (UTC)
Meep. I like it, especially the last line.
me.theyreforrachel on August 17th, 2007 03:24 pm (UTC)
thanks :)
daisylily: eating Chinese and laughing: house_ewdaisylily on August 17th, 2007 02:28 pm (UTC)
Poor Wilson! (Well, kinda :D )

Lovely writing.
me.theyreforrachel on August 17th, 2007 03:24 pm (UTC)
wilson deserves no sympathy! heh

thank you :)
Walking 'Round The Room Singing Stormy Weather: House | James Wilson | Wilsonprivateuniverse on August 18th, 2007 02:19 am (UTC)
Wow, that was really good, I only just found this fic when I was looking at some of your other stuff. I really enjoyed it and I can definitely imagine this having happened.
me.theyreforrachel on August 18th, 2007 03:15 pm (UTC)
thank you! I'm so happy that this is actually decent heh
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me.theyreforrachel on August 21st, 2007 01:59 pm (UTC)
thanks. :)
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me.theyreforrachel on August 26th, 2007 02:52 pm (UTC)
thanks. :)
ignazwisdom on September 25th, 2007 05:26 am (UTC)
Ooh, this is SO GOOD! I really enjoyed it! Brava -- my first smut fic was a total mess, so this is really impressive! :)

Since you did invite concrit, I hope you won't mind me mentioning just one thing: "throbbing cock" is one of those phrases that gets overused a bit in sex scenes, to the point that for a lot of readers, it kind of serves to throw us out of the mood of the scene. I've used it probably a zillion times myself and I'm sure I've had my betas call me on it more than once.

But really, that's just nitpicky stuff: this is a great story, and I really hope you'll keep writing more H/W smut!